tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4174674605962639325.post2094581220809867567..comments2011-05-04T08:15:04.553+02:00Comments on The Giver (by Baboon): My thinkings to the giverBaboonakanudelsaucehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11490434448974365664noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4174674605962639325.post-55127585655720626072011-04-13T21:12:41.791+02:002011-04-13T21:12:41.791+02:00Alex, thank you for this post. Your choice for the...Alex, thank you for this post. Your choice for the picture of the Giver is good. Where did you find the picture? Please always give the source!<br />Your descriptions are very detailed. YOu've got a godd eye for this!<br /><br />some words on language:<br />- as I imagine him to be<br />- check the long sentence starting "He has a big grey beard ... I think there are too many information in that sentence. At least they don't fit together...<br />- Check the spelling of "Receiver"<br />- to teach JOnas how to become a good Receiver<br />- in English: "to have a tough time"<br />- he GOT to know<br />- to have a grim lookEnglisch EF (Bru)https://www.blogger.com/profile/08524287681208619424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4174674605962639325.post-76533182267769125092011-04-13T08:55:10.766+02:002011-04-13T08:55:10.766+02:00Hey. I think you made a good job. I really liked t...Hey. I think you made a good job. I really liked that you described the picture and I can imagine the Giver now, in another way. Great!Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16069358419551418209noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4174674605962639325.post-54856431093539372532011-04-06T09:25:24.353+02:002011-04-06T09:25:24.353+02:00yes changed the size of the picture and some of t...yes changed the size of the picture and some of the text get lost -.- but i rewrite the end^^Baboonakanudelsaucehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11490434448974365664noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4174674605962639325.post-32925248479151729512011-04-06T09:22:13.895+02:002011-04-06T09:22:13.895+02:00I think this picture fits very good to my imaginat...I think this picture fits very good to my imagination of the Giver's appearance. But I guess the end of the post is missing.Franziskahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08750416323108073324noreply@blogger.com